Do's: I do like how Caryn turned out in the second and third panels, and I think Victor looks hunky enough in panel three. Don'ts: I don't like the rest of it. Shannon didn't turn out at all, and my backgrounds....well, it wasn't a good background day. I should've put trees behind Caryn in the last panel to indicate she was kicked out of the changing area. Also, Joey told me that if someone makes a comment on a guy's manhood, she would be looking at said manhood, not making eye contact as Caryn does in the third panel.

This strip is kind of a comment on Joey's remarks about JF. She says that everybody is open-minded, intelligent and honest, the girls are trusting and sincere and the guys are polite and chivalrous to a fault. Yes. JF isn't real life, it's my own idealised version. And ONLY in JF will you see two guys force a half-naked lesbian out of a changing room.

And I have to apologise to Dennis. Victor's bangs in panel two did turn out like two dead slugs attached to his forehead. The grey colour certainly doesn't help.